My fails...

I have done a list of my fails in the redaction in english.

and then i've scanned and there are...

The first is so horrible I don't know what I am thinking...

And the second is so difficult to see the fails but i cannot repair... Sorry

Garbo

Entrance of Catalan:

Garbo

Joan pujol, quin nom no? Doncs aquest nom es (el verdader) de l'Home que va salvar el món de Hitler i el nazis... Joan pujol es coneixia per el nom de Garbo(era el nom del agent doble que ell era). Garbo va fer una gran obra de caritat fent que els nazis s'anessin al sud de les costes Normandes. Peró tot això va ser possible gràcies a que “Garbo” treballava per a l'organització de seguretat exterior de Anglaterra MI5 i feia de agent doble diguen que el seu nom era Garbo, va estar treballant per a en Hitler durant molt de temps... Però la batalla final va ser el dia D el 6 de Juny de 1994 va començar el dia fatídic... Ja que en Garbo li va dir a en Hitler que l'atac Nord-americà no era a Normandia, sinó que era a Calais mes al sud de Normandia, aixó va facilitar la entrada de soldats aliats i no causar tantes baixes com les que hi hauria hagut si no hagués convençut a hitler de que era a Calais...

why?

I don't now why... but I'm so happy because i've do it lonely, and I'm so interested to travel to england or another country to learn more english. And if it's possible work there, I think that here, in Spain the councils is not to the work...

New entrance

Hi there, there's my first entrance! I'll demostrate you what I have done, in this entrance I'll demostrate you what i have done about english.

The war of the Future

It was 2049, the way to the elections... Everyone was so happy with the new president but... No one knows what really want to do the new president, I'm writing this because i want that people know and remember this historical war... Every one say that it was world war three(WWIII), but it was no a war of the world it was a dictation like the 3^rd political dictator Adolf Hitler but, it was past... Now we have a dictator called Mc Colt people says that is a familiar of Samuel Colt, he was a the first man who invents the movement of the gun called handgun that it can shoot 6 bullets of a 35mm, but i think that he is not parent of Samuel Colt, we didn't have clues but Samuel Colt was an intelligent and evil boy... We're gonna talk about Mc Colt, he was an a impportant political member but no ones can imaginate that he wanna take the country. He has a corruption organitzation, and the few of good persons are the rebels, we're going every day advancing to the enemy lines that we cannot advance becaus every day comes a lot of new soldiers and if one day we advance 50 meters the secon day they advance 100 meters... We need a miracle, the contacts are saying that we have a new boy comin', we no have so interesting in this boy, becuse we now that only a veteran can take control, but when we are in a attack he and me are between the deads of our company, i'm so nervious but i'm intenting to shoot a important Sergeant. But he was so protected, and then he, with the sound of the bombs, killed all of her soldiers and him... and he was only a tipical soldier but in her chilhood her grandfather teach him to shoot to a differents animals like wolfs and foxes... but he has a important talent, is to make a important hurt to the enemy...

2 months ago...

Now he is an important soldier who has a troop of snipers...But a girl was so happy and she kills another sniper, all of them was going to caught her medals and my friend (who is called Frank) says to the girl that surely is a trap and he was correct... Another sniper killed him... But when he intents to kill him he escape and a bomb almost destroy the bulding.

The girl die...

now he has a rival... An expert rival...

Now he is in danger, critical danger...

Marc Seco Viedma